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More commentary on "The Palace of Illusions"  

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Duryodhana is a poop-head
Yudhishthira needs to be smacked
Karna is a block headed dodo head
That is all.

Laraidra Just Got Her Voice...  

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... and she's going to sound an awful lot like her mother. I'm glad, because I've been dying to get through Chapter 10 and for some reason beyond me (the author, the creator, the "god" of these characters), she has decided that it is she who must begin the chapter. *sigh*. They're just like children.




In other news, I just devoured a trilogy of fantasy/alternate history that actually helped Laraidra find her voice. Megan Whelan Turner has written a great set of young adult fantasy books, all based on ancient Mediterranean culture. I say young adult because that's where you'll find it in the book store, and I filched the third book from my son (who got it from his 9th grade friend), but there's just enough there to intrigue us grown folks. Just say it took me cumulatively 3 days to consume all three books, but that only because I eat books like that. The only thing that niggled at my curiosity were the ages of the characters; because Turner did allude that they were realtively young, and she placed some emphasis on the main character's age. I'm probably going to read them again anyway, so I'll let you know what I come up with after then. After I do that I'm finally going to continue with the Conn Iggulden Genghis series; this one is "Lord of the Bows"

Okay, now I'm off to let Miss Laraidra have her say; because if I don't she may pitch an ugly fit inside my brain and that always gives me headaches!

Seriously, Alaric?  

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I have this character -- let's call him "Mr. A". He's supposed to be quietly traveling with his sister and waiting. He has stuff to say, but I personally think it can wait for a few chapters.

Does he listen to me? No. Is he sitting quietly waiting? No. Is is jumping around willy nilly in my brain with his hand up, screaming "Oh! Oh! Oh!". Yes.

50K words in, Mr. A seems to want to express himself. *sigh* Dude, I have other people I have to take care of before you get to speak, so leave me be for a minute or two! I don't care if you are Ms. J's twin brother, and have been traveling with her these past eight chapters. You. Have. To. Wait.

So, in any case, this is the blog for the book. You can check me out, ask questions, make comments, add your 2 cents. I may even answer your commentary -- if my characters behave *eyes Mr. A*

You can even buy the parts as they come out. I'm publishing it as a serial, in four chapter sections. Nicely bound and all that there. Right now, I've got part one available. You can either buy it over on the right side of the blog ---->

Or over at my Etsy shop. Your choice. (hint: buying it over on the right will keep you from having to join Etsy to buy).